Monday, 12 October 2009

Not easily broken

Near the edge
On the cliff
Time ticking away

Errors turned miseries
Answers unfound
Shadows burnt
Intense fire
Lighting up
You are mistaken

Bits of hope
Rising high
On my own
Keen to explore
Eager to discover
Newness within me…

Written for Acrostic Only
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7 comments:

  1. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)12 October 2009 at 03:41

    Poorni, welcome to Acrostic Only.

    This is a very good and beautiful acrostic about strength and the joy of starting life anew.

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  2. Cynthia12 October 2009 at 18:42

    Poorni, this poem is lovely and exciting.
    An acrostic that really speaks to the
    affirmation of life.

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  3. Surya (RADHAKRISHNAN G)14 October 2009 at 10:50

    You wont find new.... you will find the old, but once you find it out, then from that moment you may feel it as new....
    I am sure you have many 'olds' left in you and day by day you are getting one by one as new!

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  4. Jim14 October 2009 at 22:39

    Poorni, I am glad your poet found hope.
    Without hope all is of no avail.
    ..

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  5. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)31 October 2009 at 23:50

    Congratulations! You have won a BAP Awards, one for this poem. Click HERE and scan down!

    I am so glad you joined us.

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  6. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)1 November 2009 at 23:05

    Sorry about that. Here's the link, and you can always find it on the top of AO, "Winners" button.

    http://acrosticcontestwinners.blogspot.com/2009/11/not-easily-broken.html

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  7. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)1 November 2009 at 23:06

    I am so sorry, I think I spelled your name wrong. I will correct it and make a new badge .. forgive me please.

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