Monday, 26 October 2009

Elusive

Entangled with my own confusions
Misty eyes blurring visions
Lost soul wondering in reality
Waiting for the dreams to return
Hopes clinging on to beliefs

Someday elusive dreams will come true
For that glorious moment
I shall fight
The chasing death
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 October 2009 at 05:11

    heyy..wonderful ya..njoyed readin it..nice words u've used..:)

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  2. Tumblewords:26 October 2009 at 16:33

    I love the way you turned that around for the last stanza and ended with strength and hope.

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  3. SandyCarlson26 October 2009 at 17:20

    That is the good fight!

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  4. Anonymous26 October 2009 at 21:53

    good one!!i enjoyed it..

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  5. itsyvitsy26 October 2009 at 22:23

    Entangled with my own confusions - this is something I would totally relate to. At each moment in our lives we try to achieve newer goals and seek newer avenues. The options are so vast we are confused as what to do and what not to do. In this quest we fight many of our emotions, many of our dear ones, and sacrifice a lot (which perhaps we would regret later). I love this piece.

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  6. Patois4227 October 2009 at 06:49

    Tis a fabulous ending to top off a great poem. Love that sense of power and resolve.

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  7. Tammie Lee28 October 2009 at 17:53

    wonderful determination
    yet still feeling along the way.
    Spirithelpers

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  8. Anonymous31 October 2009 at 11:42

    someday, elusive dreams will come true. well said! :)

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