Monday, 26 October 2009

Elusive

Entangled with my own confusions
Misty eyes blurring visions
Lost soul wondering in reality
Waiting for the dreams to return
Hopes clinging on to beliefs

Someday elusive dreams will come true
For that glorious moment
I shall fight
The chasing death

8 comments:

  1. heyy..wonderful ya..njoyed readin it..nice words u've used..:)

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  2. I love the way you turned that around for the last stanza and ended with strength and hope.

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  3. Entangled with my own confusions - this is something I would totally relate to. At each moment in our lives we try to achieve newer goals and seek newer avenues. The options are so vast we are confused as what to do and what not to do. In this quest we fight many of our emotions, many of our dear ones, and sacrifice a lot (which perhaps we would regret later). I love this piece.

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  4. Tis a fabulous ending to top off a great poem. Love that sense of power and resolve.

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  5. wonderful determination
    yet still feeling along the way.
    Spirithelpers

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  6. someday, elusive dreams will come true. well said! :)

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