Monday, 5 October 2009

CHEMisrty

Unequalled
This distance
Between us
Is catalysing
The chemistry of our bond

Theories of attraction
Proved consistent
Together
We will react
To lose ourselves into a single alloy

Awaiting
Your return
High on u
M drugged for sure
With this new found chemical of love...

Poorna

7 comments:

  1. A most enjoyable post, words were lovely.

    Take care.

    Yvonne.

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  2. This is very clever. I like how you used chemistry terms throughout the poem to define the natural attraction between lovers.

    Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I truly appreciate it. Have a great week!

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  3. this is great stuff.. a 'chemical locha' being defined in the truest sense...

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  4. Love gives life the chemistry to give and share with all.

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  5. chemistry..
    yeah ! chemistry is all I can feel here.. kinda reminds me of the obnoxious odours as well

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  6. i have a limited understanding Poornima, decaying brain, don't understand much poetry.

    i see inorganic chemistry here. Organic is fashionable. No catalyst whatsoever. No third party.

    The idea of an alloy is brilliant. Bronze lasts longer.
    You have a way with words and brilliant imagination Poornima.

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  7. Brilliant! I like the analogy here. Well done, you!!!

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