Sunday, 29 November 2009

Migration

Sitting across the sea
Pondering over good and bad
Thoughts keep migrating
Between the two
From shore to sea
From sea, back to shore
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13 comments:

  1. PassionMust30 November 2009 at 02:01

    nice thought :)

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  2. Karthikakarthik30 November 2009 at 02:08

    PoorniMa, your thoughts are inspiring

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  3. Amit Kumar Das30 November 2009 at 04:40

    pondering.... good words there ... :) keep walking!!!

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  4. Sherri B.30 November 2009 at 05:42

    I love what you did with this prompt...this was a very unique take on how we struggle with our thoughts. Wonderful!

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  5. PS the Pratsie30 November 2009 at 07:39

    simple yet deep :)

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  6. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)30 November 2009 at 08:16

    I love the concept of migrating thoughts.

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  7. kelvin s.m.30 November 2009 at 23:07

    Hi Poorni,

    Yours was neat too... You write very short lines yet very deep in meaning... :)

    Thanks for your visit and humble comment...

    Good day!!!:)

    >Kelvin

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  8. RHYTHM AND RHYME1 December 2009 at 01:34

    As I live close to the sea I can relateto this.
    Excellent write.

    Yvonne.

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  9. Tumblewords:1 December 2009 at 12:08

    Ah, yes. Thoughts migrate even when the body keeps its place.

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  10. Sumi Mathai2 December 2009 at 04:33

    quite an unique thought. we often sit by the shore and let our mind wander.but the imagery u conjured up,the thoughts migrating to n fro is unexpected.and finally.did those thoughts decide to take which part? :)

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  11. Blunt Edges2 December 2009 at 12:29

    confused aren't u?

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  12. itsyvitsy5 December 2009 at 13:06

    Simply marvelous. Simple thoughts explained quite deeply with the analogy of sea and shore. The mind meanders and then returns back to its rightful place. Beautiful.

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  13. gabrielle5 December 2009 at 22:12

    atmospheric. love the drift of thought - oceans have that effect

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