Sunday, 29 November 2009

Migration

Sitting across the sea
Pondering over good and bad
Thoughts keep migrating
Between the two
From shore to sea
From sea, back to shore

13 comments:

  1. PoorniMa, your thoughts are inspiring

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  2. pondering.... good words there ... :) keep walking!!!

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  3. I love what you did with this prompt...this was a very unique take on how we struggle with our thoughts. Wonderful!

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  4. I love the concept of migrating thoughts.

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  5. Hi Poorni,

    Yours was neat too... You write very short lines yet very deep in meaning... :)

    Thanks for your visit and humble comment...

    Good day!!!:)

    >Kelvin

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  6. As I live close to the sea I can relateto this.
    Excellent write.

    Yvonne.

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  7. Ah, yes. Thoughts migrate even when the body keeps its place.

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  8. quite an unique thought. we often sit by the shore and let our mind wander.but the imagery u conjured up,the thoughts migrating to n fro is unexpected.and finally.did those thoughts decide to take which part? :)

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  9. Simply marvelous. Simple thoughts explained quite deeply with the analogy of sea and shore. The mind meanders and then returns back to its rightful place. Beautiful.

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  10. atmospheric. love the drift of thought - oceans have that effect

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