God created the beauty
The fragrance of the tiny flowers spread across miles
The varied shades of the firmament lying quiet
The birds humming the divine tunes
The soft breeze carrying the holy whispers
The flowing water purifying the souls it touches
The mother earth holding the remains without any complaints
The trees standing in patience n bearing the sweet fruits
The rains showering the message of love
The never repeating colours making the rainbow glow
The world a screen, every dusk n every dawn a new scene
Then he created the Humans
And his creativity ceased to exist forever after…
A most refreshing and oh so true poem.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this very much.
Brilliant!!!!!!!!!
Yvonne.
Nice one. Very beautifully articulated. I specially liked "The world a screen, every dusk n every dawn a new scene". Thoughts that every reader of this poem should ponder upon. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteThanks Poorni! Btw, ur writes are impressive too :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the last two lines "Then he created the Humans
ReplyDeleteAnd his creativity ceased to exist forever after"
yeah..the Gods must have gone crazy after he created humans!
hahah the last line...:)
ReplyDeletewonderful poem. i like the refreshing freshness of it and you write beautifully. and, has His creativity ceased to exist? ponder a bit on that. wherever He is, there is creativity. He is creativity.
ReplyDeletenow the last lines adds humor and meaning :)! nice blog cya around
ReplyDeleteAwesome! I think this piece is very serene and peaceful... Loved the read!!!:)
ReplyDelete>Kelvin
with very single line comes a strong image, just as u have described it. i especially liked lines like birds humming divine tunes, uncomplaining earth and breeze carrying holy whispers. u drew a picture of perfect nature.
ReplyDeletea lil bit of disagreement with the last two lines, though. the humans are nothing to be a cause to have him stopped his creativity. he might repent for this one creation however.
So beautifully expressed..Isn't God's creations wonderful?
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