Monday 7 December 2009

Lighthouse

In the abyss of
Lost hopes
Fighting hard
Not to drown in the silence
Sailing and floating
In a direction unknown, unexplored
Help me find a path
Be my lighthouse
Be with me, my master!
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14 comments:

  1. itsyvitsy8 December 2009 at 01:27

    You know, sometimes I really wonder how little words can convey a lot. Sometimes silence can convey a lot too. Allow me to say that these words are "quiet", but it is this profound silence that has conveyed a beautiful prayer. Cheers.

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  2. Maggie8 December 2009 at 10:06

    It is a wonderful thing to have a lighthouse to guide us in dark times:)

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  3. Sherri B.8 December 2009 at 14:02

    Very powerful words...we've all been in that place.

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  4. SandyCarlson8 December 2009 at 19:51

    Oh, to have a lighthouse!

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  5. Tumblewords:8 December 2009 at 21:02

    A lighthouse is a beacon of joy! Nice post.

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  6. HaRy!!9 December 2009 at 01:40

    Hope in the darkest hour !..well done

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  7. Sorcerer9 December 2009 at 05:54

    lovely..
    :)
    we all need a lighhouse to guide us through the dark

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  8. R. Ramesh9 December 2009 at 09:20

    good one ya...really good..somehow i remembered tagore's where the mind is without fear....

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  9. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)9 December 2009 at 17:02

    Lighthouses are wonderful, I think the most wonderful one that was in my life, be it a short time, was my mother. This is like a prayer.

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  10. Carlos Gesmundo9 December 2009 at 17:32

    It is worthwhile to ask for direction. Everyone needs at least one mentor, a lighthouse.

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  11. The Write Girl10 December 2009 at 21:12

    What an engaging and stirring post and so filled with imagery.

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  12. Loch Rob11 December 2009 at 16:13

    I think we all look for that beacon or direction in life.

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  13. Amity11 December 2009 at 18:02

    when we are lost, we try to hold onto something or call someone who can be our lighthouse to get us up from the abyss of disappointments!!!

    very beautiful dear!!!

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  14. A Cuban In London15 December 2009 at 02:02

    Oh, that poem took my breath away! But why wait for him to tell you what to do? Go out and do it yourself! :-)

    Greetings from London.

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