Sunday 27 June 2010

Away

In between our souls
When distance embraced each parting step
I was not to choose.
So I let myself to disintegrate --
To become your dream
That could never be disowned.

Poorna

13 comments:

  1. Lovcely words short maybe but the nessage came across,

    Yvonne,

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  2. nice - the new look of the blog is good :)

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  3. So you chose to disintegrate..

    Well, Poornima, perhaps my first visit to your page.. It's beautiful..

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  4. lovely poorni, binu.

    have been noticing your comments in my blog, the continuum. came in to visit you. good to read your lines.

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  5. nice to read your lines poorni.

    have been coming into your sphere now and then and getting your comments too in my blog, the continuum. good to know a poetess here.

    cheers

    binu

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  6. How sad to disintegrate when you have no choice and cannot be with your love.

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  7. Nicely done. Very interesting poem


    Melanie

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  8. even tho lost it appears that one is in possession and not lost at all...

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  9. I know that kind of holding on!

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  10. beautiful lines, Poorni. its so melancholic and tugs at my heart, but amazingly beautiful.

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  11. awesome expression indeed!!missing some one!

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  12. wow...this one really touched me; short yet very powerful in its own right! -d.m.k.

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